Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Feb 12, 2018
This poem is part of the workshop:

Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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SunKu 1 Workshop

Fighting
To be me
Ain’t that easy

People’s
Opinions
Got it twisted

Shaming
Lost it’s punch
Went straight pass me.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

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Comments

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 2 months ago

the composition, the rhythmical flow, the alliteration you have it all
plus i relate to the content very much

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

So good to read this. Short form being your forte no wonder you picked up the threads of Sunku so quickly. Looking forward to red more.

I think opinion is 4 syllabi..i may be wrong..

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