Your lovely thoughts
the flame for fame
has been now flamed
as I move along
the RIVER OF LIFE...
When I was young
every other day we heard
so and so had a brother
or new born sister
so many also came along with bouquets
as it were their young to arrive kid’s
Baby’s shower
Now as I move along the river much faster
every now and then I hear
of a natural inevitable disaster
so and so has passed away
it’s been the nth news these past months
buried away
and every time one passes away
I wonder if it's about my coming day
when I will not hear
but know ahead of life's way
Lovedly also has passed away
But till then let my flame stay
slowly smouldering away.
Yes not to worry and they will still say
No one will ever miss you I (we) say..
This poetry reveals an individual thought
may be,
but it's universal still
could it not be....
Comments
I think in the absence of a reado meter
all poetry not commented for a week
must be removed
by the poster/poeter
Lovedly....no need to
Lovedly....no need to unpublish...i think this is one of your better posts and indicates your sensitivity about the happenings...
regards..
how kind of you raj
I look forwards to meeting
friends like you
some day
may be some day
soon
none can that say
but we must all hope
in my way
it may happen
may not
let it be
but friendly poets
we shall and should be
so be HAPPIER than
Happy
RGDS
Wishing you a long healthy
Wishing you a long healthy life Lovedly...Stay good
Regards..
thank you
raj
ur an upcoming
if not already
UP poet