My my my looks like fun
speeding across ocean waters
over blue ripples
under summer sun
The cool wind mixed with warmth
blowing in my hair
under summer clouds
in a red and white boat screaming.
If only I weren't afraid
of the vast waters
enveloping my soul
taking away my breath
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Ian T
Thanks for the suggestions. I think they are good. The one about screaming loud would not describe me. In a situation like that I'm not screamer but is quiet, I would grab a hold of you burying my head the whole time. You could not pry me away lol.
Lol my my me
As usual I know nothing about everything. I've never been around a bay liner only seen on TV. I saw an add advertising one for sale on face book marketplace.and it look like fun. So I imagine fun and wrote about what it might feel like.
As you may have realize by now I don't follow conversations very well. A story of my life. Lol