The cycle of life.
Every experience helps us grow.
Every growth helps us experience.
The circle of Life.
Oct 16, 2017
Recycling
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A poem is worth a thousand pictures.
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
A lesser one of yours,
dare I say a bit trite?
But hey, no-one's perfect.
I look forward to your works and won't use the excuse "I wish I had more time", more truthful to say "I will endeavour to make more time" to respond to your works.
Raw Review
Truth be told it's trite
Poetic review is right
True Weirdelf insight