OriginalRhyku
Oct 10, 2017

Political Pawns:

No morality
Dealing with duplicity
Loss of Sovereignty

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Client states prostrate to alien dictates

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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Comments

weirdelf

if you can make the form work, would be-
No morality
Not dealing with duplicity
Will cause Loss of Sovereignty

O

I like your version - it is clearer - although the Rhyku requirement of 5-7-5 syllables will not be met.