I wish I was as skinny as my shadow
I wish I was as easy to hide
I wish that telling the truth was easy
And just as hard to tell that I lied.
Nov 16, 2017
Shadow
About This Poem
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Comments
Short & Sweet
Personifications of what you wish to be
See all of life is but a mystery filled with questions.
Scooby you opened a great door here with a marvelous poem thank you kindly,