lovedly
lovedly
Sep 10, 2016

O dad where are you..,Now

When dads go away young
they leave behind memories
so fresh
these never ever age
as dad it appears is here still

but who can fight
against an unknown
unseen gods will

We alone have to severe grief
and our left over time kill

I wonder if dad knows or ever will
he must be ether by now
waiting my merger...
O dad
where will we meet
do indicate an RV
and tell me
how I will recognise thee

O heaven believe me
Dad did love me
Only

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

V

My thinking is that we all meet in the carbon and nitrogen cycles. The thought is very materialistic. It does not mean that I do not entertain the thought of a place where I may meet my parents and loved ones. Perhaps, I am in limbo. So bad! No matter what, I do like your poem and your thoughts.
I am still on earth, but I do believe that Dad only loves you.

Thank you for sharing.

Keith Logan

you have happy memories. Those are yours forever. I won't comment on people's beliefs but if they give you comfort that is the important thing.