UNWANTED PREGNANCY

Fairness I search in life's dictionary,
though unfair occupies.
splashy by surprise.
it's dusted of the happiness.
claiming is a pleasure,
but a torture.

love they said is blind,
but wisdom is wise.

the most she loves you
among the multiple,
the child may be yours,
but conceiving is contradicted
D.N.A will shout
and memory brings an update

resemblance neither the father
although the truth stands just
the affair breath the air
but unwanted drowned it all.

life is not always fair
when things turns awkward
but just a lesson.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: An advise to the youths to play safe sex and abstain from unwanted pregnancy or unwanted situation in a relationship.

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria , abuja

Favorite Poets: Any good poet of my likening

Comments

Simon

good job but needs more improvement

I APPRECIATE THE CORRECTION

thanks brother for your advise