....it is the incomprehensible
Like the azure,
having neither beginning nor ending.
The prince of innocence
that rides the flying horse
in a transitional space.
The sensitive snail
that sings war & peace
from generation to generation
Pride of the kids
Regret of the negligent
Age.
The strength of the weak
& the weakness of the strong.
The unseen umpire of activities
In an eyeblink, it's
come & gone.
it's the time.
Comments
expanding your vision
into the incomprehensible, into the realm of imagination and the use if images and words. Nice poem!
The prince of innocence
that rides the flying horse
in a transitional space.
Very strong use of words and images, has a meaning we can understand only in the imagination.
Not sure about the "snail", the only image that stands out a bit as forced.
These type of "metaphysical" poems are hard to pull off, but I think you are on your way here to understand the process of letting an idea of something play in your head and have it come out as a poem. Keep going!
thank you Emolpus for your
thank you Emolpus for your teachings. it has helped me improve