Comfort

Warm blankets.
A charged tablet.
A cup of coffee.
When the weekend starts,
being in my bed.
Rested on a fluffed pillow.
Youtube loaded up
on the screen.
And a butter rum muffin.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

Comments

successful short poem

Something everyone can relate too. It is relaxing just to read. I can taste that muffin.
Very 2017. Keep this poem and look back at it in 20 years!

Thanks.

Yea, it will more pleasant looking back at the recent poems I have now in 10 or 20 years, than past work I wrote 10-15 years ago today. I can taste that muffin, I use to love it with coffee.

Just what...

the doctor ordered! A nice, relaxing morning pursuing the latest news, gossip and a leisurely breakfast! The title is self-explanatory and the theme is perfect for the weekend. ~ Gee.
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comfort

comes in many forms and can even differ for a particular person from day to day. I like the way this almost reads like a list poem.....stan

Comfort can definitely come in many ways. It's funny, writing this I thought "a single small object can give comfort in broad ways". Something someone else takes for granted, and there would be many ways you can write about. I guess that's the privilege poets have that the rest of the world is lacking, our ability is see the big pictures in miniature things. Gotta love it!