Pugilist
By Pugilist, 20 July, 2017
brittle light

I've read some of your critiques
they have all been reasonable, well stated,and of high utility.
I, myself, would consider any advise you had to offer.

I like your straight ahead approach
stay hard core, I find it refreshing

sincerely,

S

check off the highest level for critique just for the fun of it. i might not take all suggestions but all are appreciated.......stan

Pugilist

Critique is not a set of commands. It's merely one writer offering perspective. It remains the responsibility of the creator to review the feedback and decide what should be embraces, what should be ignored, and what belongs in a dumpster.

If you desire to improve your work, request raw feedback and seriously consider every comment.

If you are just here to be told how pretty you are, we'll never interact. That will be best for both of us.