They singers,
must be good
never heard
but get out of the dungeons
into a lightened world
sing praises yet unheard
of those birds'
empty walls would love to hear
from singers poets like you
come out into the open
sing never worry
they all sang a million times
before they were heard
you also will...
come out from the darkness
to broad daylight
this is just a mad world
SILENCE
Yes the silence of a dark night
makes it an eerie experience
even birds sing in tones
low
owls coo softly
they sleep with open eyes
your silence we all surmise
emanates from the health of an ailing angel
may the silence be soothing
as night falls by
dreams may come
as a healing
as meditation does to some
during day light
silence comes to some
as dark as night
Comments
I'm going to take a firm stand here...
I like it.
you scared me jess
haven't you noticed
I am fading away slowly
from neo
but tell me where to go
hang around, dear lovedly
sure, I give you are hard time at times but you're a big boy and know I always have a reason.
And your gems are worth waiting for. If there are any of your works in particular you would like my feedback on PM me, but not all of them, I can't possibly keep up with your profligacy.
kindness jess
one or two of recent origin
shall find and let u know
as PM
thanks master
you are brilliant
Loved
Better that you fade a little if you are going to write such good pieces, Loved it..
One Crit take out those damned and's and let it flow as it can.
Take care young Bard as always,
Yours Ian..