Race_9togo
Race_9togo
Jun 27, 2017
This poem is part of the workshop:

IMAGERY IN POETRY( ready to start?)

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Rock (Imagery Workshop)

Pale hardness, polished smooth by endless icy river.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Late to the Party, as usual

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne

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Comments

jane210660

This is lovely, I can see that smooth shiny river pebble.
Could you edit it and add it to the workshop, so it's saved in the workshop collection. Just scroll down to the bottom of your edit page and select the imagery workshop.
Jx

S

Reminds me of the quartz river stones found in the mountain streams nearby...........stan

Race_9togo

That's pretty much always how I think when considering imagery - colors and shapes that give an emotional aspect to the words.

Race_9togo

about the title. But is not the title of a poem the precursor to the imagery? Can one be divorced from the other?
You collect stones? So do I...LOL what's wrong with us?

I would like some opinions on this thing with imagery and title.