Geremia
Geremia
Jun 21, 2017

REDEMPTIO

REDEMPTIO

The devil plays his seduction
and with savage fury rips into my soul.
I wait for the Messenger
hovering
in shadows dark and cold;
my body begins to whither.
my heart is sick with fearful imaginations
and flaming arrows destroy
all hopes of redemption.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Joe needs to write. Showing early signs of A..... Richard

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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Geezer

Geezer

7 years 10 months ago

Joe, this is powerful! I felt the emotion pulling me into it's grip. I am still in awe of your tenacity; the need to write, the urge to communicate with the rest of the world. Thank you for the reminder and insight; this could be me, this might be me, this will be me. Maybe...
Gee.
.

lovedly

will to live must over power any evil
remember it
fear not of the ultimate
when it comes you will not
even know it
in a slash it will come
like a tornado it will go
you won't ever then know.

Candlewitch

may peace be your ultimate reward...your words will be remembered.

*hugs, Cat