Intelligence spin
Augmented mental linchpin
But Genius Within
Nov 27, 2016
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Intelligence spin
Augmented mental linchpin
But Genius Within
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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You can get away with a lot by political license
but why spell intelligence wrong?
The use of linchpin implies a minor part that maintains a whole, almost ok so far,
what genius within? Whose? Why?
The best I can say of this is that it makes me ask questions,
but not questions of any real interest.
Sometimes less is more. In this case less is less.
Explain it to me, if it has one.
re: spin
Jess, this Rhyku is with reference to all the products being advertised and sold for increasing mental prowess. There is the advertisement spin on intelligence enhancement by buying products that will target the control centres of our mental faculties but the true genius resides in our realization of our natural and innate abilities.
Thank you Remark
I have been in meditative mode after the passing away of a near and dear one. I am not sure if I am fully back and this may be reflected in the content of my future Rhykus.