lovedly
lovedly
Jun 05, 2017

obscurantism

'' A style in art and literature characterized by deliberate vagueness or obliqueness.''
obscurantism

Mid night here
Too hot to sleep
AC'S not working
the electricity fails the public

I made many poets here
follow me
in composing
FREE VERSE poetry

Stan has thought of introducing
a Jun competition free style
28 lines
why 28 only he knows
may be a gene of
obscurantism

Snow man hates it (free style)
yet is the first one to post it .

I woke up in the middle of the night
a word
obscurantism
came to my obscure mind
and
I thought of challenging
the newer human generic minds
to compose a poetry
in any style
19 lines

the theme and meaning
of the word has been highlighted
You need not challenge me
I Googled it

Stan are you round the corner
O man here it's about to dawn
and a new morn
should be naturally born
no Caeserian
it's dangerous

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

lovedly

Caesarian
yes a C section
many spellings possible
depends on the size of
C or c

Post your poetry here only
No contest
only seasoned participation
please for me

I am learning a 77 year old student
still learning

lovedly

modified obscurantism poetry edit!

Caesarean poetry

Mid night here
too hot to sleep
AC'S not working
the electricity fails the public

I made many poets here
follow me
in composing
FREE VERSE poetry

Stan has thought of introducing
a Jun competition free style
28 lines
why 28 only he knows
may be a gene of
obscurantism

Snow man hates it (free style)
yet is the first one to post it.
I woke up in the middle of the night
a word
obscurantism
came to my obscure mind
and
I thought of challenging
the newer human generic minds
to compose poetry
in any style
19 (+) lines

The theme and meaning
of the word has been highlighted
you need not challenge me
I Googled it

Stan are you round the corner
O man here it's about to dawn
and a new morn
should be naturally born
no Caesarean
it's dangerous

S

Obscurantism challenge....

Ley lines
through the sun
burn wicked
wicker man poses

Pull that thread through the
Anticipation
Precipitation
Weather
Station

Watch as the flames die drown
the ordinary
Let the fragrance
waft over the clouds
into the buds of new born flowers

A wanderer wonders why
the blossom grows with vigor
It steals the flames of the sun
feels no shame
petals undone

S

4
be
keen
knees
sure
?

4 keen knees
be sure

Yes, you are quite obscure!

Eumolpus

A lot talk about obscure and abstract poetry lately. Here's one I've been working on. This is my 46th revision.. I know what I am trying to say. The suffering that went into this work, the endless carving of every syllable. If you don't understand it, ITS TOO BAD!!!

OPUS 46

The days pass like red ants
Within the bowels of the whale
A cacophony of lava meets sea
The hose of orbits spout dragonflies
I am that Daniel
Hoist hoist the rooster
on his osso bucco
Moonlight on the wilderbeest
Forgetfulness of hammock
O train of totem poles
Bringeth the warmer seedlings

Send the numerals to riverbanks
Whilst
The pizza is sonata to whiteout

Hope you enjoyed, :)

Eumolpus

yes it was a typo! (The wildebeest is a symbol of reincarnation in Xanadu.)

I'm not sure what you mean "qualify"....this poem is a defining oeuvre, my tour de force!
But sadly I think it will be misunderstood...what fools these mortals be!

(Onward to more interesting things. I just read a skull was discovered in Morocco that dates mankind another 100,000 years! So we are not 200,000 old as a species, but 300,000. It's amazing we can find one bone and date ourselves that way...simply amazing. 100,000 years seems to be a pretty long time!)
Have a great day