lovedly
lovedly
May 10, 2017
This poem is part of the contest:

May Contest

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poem contest one and two not for rewards

She then and now

WHEN I was young...
she made tea and coffee for me

now when my hands shake
she yells at me

can't you even add sugar properly
now she is training me

old age is a curse
we all depend not on poetic verse

but on times gone worse
from a sparking skin
to wrinkles

when she did smile
I had tears of joy
now as I grow old
she toys for words
why don't now come tears

she loves me still
but says
when will you go
you are now too old
suffering untold
my new bf says
push him

where ???
he stares

Second below above one

The TITANIC

Sinking of the Titanic

So many on the
TI - TA N - ICS
I have composed
the same bodies
again and again disposed

but the beautiful marks on the carriage
they scored
my what a lovely sight
if they'd been whorred

they loved like angels two
a nude lady
and
a painter (artist) phew

they lived a few moments of their life
and
all say the only one time
makes a lady pregnant
if she only wears a diamond
on her bare body
where she has to bear
a man's gait
and
his vertically straight!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

lovedly

I DIDN'T READ the SPRING part of it
I thought twas springing poetry

You must be right
I will do a redo

but is May
SPRING?