With a book / you can cook
All this food / for each mood.
With that a/pron on tight,
Cook with all / of your might.
May 05, 2017
Anapest
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
With a book / you can cook
All this food / for each mood.
With that a/pron on tight,
Cook with all / of your might.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I'd like to see the verse longer,
but you have found Anapest. That was spot on.
Correct Anapest, the real trick,
only learned through reading and practise, is to right longer using polysyllabic words, it is a gently, leading meter.
I'll do a reading if you write another one.