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May 02, 2017

SEASONS

Through the window all is green
all the flowers are in bloom
all the wild birds sing and preen
as the sun fights off night's gloom.
The seasons turn another page.

A turkey booms just down the hill
hoping to lure a hen his way.
Bullfrogs harrumph from marshy rill
and crickets chirp minutes away.
But inside I just sit and age.

On this side of the windowed wall
autumn reigns despite the date.
Leaves fall as time ticks down the hall.
Inside the hour becomes late
like the third act on some stage.

For shelter I go back in time
to all the autumns of my past
which have accrued like salty rime.
It seems they come and go so fast
inside my timeless temporal cage.

So let the seasons go their way
I'm in the autumn of my years
with winter soon to come in play
uncertain and filled with fears
all of which against I rage.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Comments

Keith Logan

This is a truly beautiful homage to the natural world. I would not change a thing.
PS: typo third verse, ticks.

S

Thanks for the eagle eye but I think tics and ticks are both acceptable ways of spelling. But I'll check just to be sure. Appreciate your dropping by............stan

Geezer

Geezer

7 years 12 months ago

Just one little crit. Think maybe you should rework the cricket line to read:

"and crickets chirp at the end of day". or some such to relive the word [way].
~ Gee.
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S

I'll give that line some thought and take your suggestion in mind in eventual edit............stan

S

Lost youth.... indeed there are many times each day I mourn the loss of things I used to be able to do. BUT then there's experience gained and the increase in memories one can call back on.....stan