lovedly
lovedly
Apr 30, 2017

o Judy ma'am

We all are a part of Snowman's SONNET workshop

Your sonnet is perfect
but for my weakness of identifying syllables
can you remark this beautiful piece

so that we all can learn
where 'tis iambic
where trochee
and
the two more
dactyl etc
and
also let all know
some thing about
scansions
what it means....

a dull waffling piffling
still poet me
once loved
now ly
added loved
don't add wanker
as does
jess
to your virtues
I address

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

judyanne

so that | we ALL | can LEARN |
where 'TIS | i-AMB ic |
WHERE TROCH-ee |
and the | TWO MORE |
DAC-tyl et |-CET-e-ra |
and AL-| so LET | all KNOW |
SOME-thing | a- BOUT |
SCAN-sions |
what it MEANS....|

The bar is not usually placed at the end of the lines, but I thought you might find it easier to recognise the feet...

Lol .... now you look up what meter formats you have used in this ....
Do it Loved - I don't want you wasting my time...

As for scansion - it is the beat of the write

Love judy
xxx
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