The wind alone
will always whistle
the way it used to do
when you were with me
along the blowing wind
simply whistling
we two
No one like me
will ever love you
now, you have no clue
ingrain my name
on the gifted stone
pay later in heaven
all will need
more love here too
a vaster wilderness
Comments
Very deep aura in piece
I'm grateful that I live in America where there is freedom in the land.
Very good piece and authentic quality.
chevvy
I have read you before
you are so kind
dear lovedly,
this is an especially soul-stirring piece...I love it's quiet reflective undertone.
love, Cat
kindness
cats
now I am becoming a serious poet
as I stand at the edge of a cliff
any day twill be over
in a whiff
loved
I think it is good if you can be serious at times but don't lose that funny side. We all need to have a variety in our write, At least, that's what I believe.
Alid
loved
I loved this piece,.The imagery is vivid. Well written. Thanks for sharing
Alid
nice to see you
alidz
Very nice piece
I want to praise you for your work & effort.
It must have taken a while to come up with such a credible piece.
Light & Love
Mario Vitale
that you have come by a second time
gives me the incentive to die
a stone of white marble do install
with a luminous plate
here lies the
POET
called
Loved
Loved
Ingrained in memories minds we drift,
There in a breath of wind we hold,
Then feelings are dashed into shards
Then in the new sunlight they glisten
A spinning chandelier of love held
A voice whispers we are home again
Good write young Bard I knew you could and I am seldom wrong.
Whisper your feelings they will be heard,
Even in the greatest noise of this world.
Yours Ian..
you are the only wine
you are the only wine
red nor white
but the purest form
one of fresh wine
which inspires
ere,
even before it turns to wine
you make me shine
in all your glory
you have to tell this world
many a story
of why we become poets here
Ian you say it loud without any fear
none will dare you spear
i am a poet but queer
treat this as a draft
poetic compliment
I now post also
IT will be nice for new comers to scan this one
composed long long ago
many have glossed
quite a few have praised
I Thank them