Ambition denied
As Lady Macbeth belied
Cresting legal tide
Nov 09, 2016
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Ambition denied
As Lady Macbeth belied
Cresting legal tide
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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Poignant - relevant -
Poignant - relevant - condensed
all spring to my mind.
Jx
Jane210660
I appreciate your review - I am glad that my Rhyku resonates with those reading it. Most of my Rhykus are based on what I hear on the news or what I observe during the day and I try to make them relevant and resonate. Thanks.
Very relevant
They are very relevant and never cease to amaze me as to how much you seem to convey in such a short form. That you manage to inject irony or humour in is even more astounding.
Jx
Jane210660
Overwhelmed by your overly generous review of my pedestrian poetry.
But I need the positive reinforcement so I will simply say thanks.
hear no the bells duncan thou they summon U to heaven or hell!
"Out Out Vile Spot!!"
he was a poet..producer..
he knew the street people
and the high class...
hmm..I relate.
and the actors for we all
live in our little and grandiose
worlds making our way...
Excellent poem!
thank U!
Esker
Your pertinent quotes with your usual and unique insights - much appreciated.