OriginalRhyku
Oct 13, 2016

Evolve Resolve:

Tenacity drives
Perspicacity survives
Veracity thrives

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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O

Mark, I do not mean to educate anyone and certainly not experienced persons like yourself who have a comprehensive education in life's lessons. I just use poetry as a means of expressing my views and enjoying the experience of transposing my thoughts into written words. If anyone agrees with my views, thanks but even for those who disagree, I appreciate the frank exchange since there needs to be a plurality of opinions and ideas to make the discussion more interesting.

Esker

Esker

8 years 6 months ago

a new word
Perspicacity!

thank U Poet!

Mr Wolf!

B

Great poem!
I really like the so-called economic poems when they are at the same time so full of thoghts
A small suggestion only
Sense and reason's linked in any way so I can imagine a fourth row t e x

Emotionellaty binds

O

I think that your fourth line suggestion is a good one and a positive addition - only that adding the fourth line would mean that the poem would not meet Rhyku requirements (Three lines of 5-7-5 syllables respectively that rhyme).