lovedly
lovedly
Oct 14, 2016

yes and no of lovers retreat in life

Marriage is a two way connection
a two sides
sharpened weapon
those who slice by the right side
want to try now with the left
both make one's mind
cleft of marriage
what else is left

some divorce
many live in remorse
only fling and flow
some let go
and
living on in happiness
they show

So come my friend
use not your knife
not only will you lose your wife
but also your life

So I suggest just hang on
this misery of life
one day will also be gone

Why advance strife
enjoy with a loving wife
think also of others misery
his couldn't better
than yours be
or may be ,perhaps...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

A true vision of a marriage well written. Regards Roscoe....

Esker

Esker

8 years 6 months ago

a few wanted to marry..I never did....
a child....wanted...
and many other men who were not cut out for the job
I raised theirs as their own as the mothers are more
important then just the fathers..
there are good dads out there..
but many sadly not..

marriage is hard work
give and take...communication
etc....
been in relationships since I
was twenty one
now fifty three
a long haul

lucky enough to
have had a choice
rather then grasp
on

been a great joy
sharing lives with
people
nice to be loved
something I value
in my Values

thank U Lovedly
for this poem
on the Great Union

Mr Wolf!