She has a castle in the glass,
I see it almost five days a week.
There’s no one carries a free pass,
you’ve got to graft to have a peak.
The streets of gold are on the turn,
this all we hear from May’s sad crew.
They surround the alchemist urn,
conjuring an unsustainable brew.
There’s a man with apples on his coat,
another with a short sharp beard.
One man adorned the Masonic goat,
another looked quite unprepared.
Just to look at their tired faces,
knowing they look back at mines.
We’re all going to separate places,
but for a few the sun never shines.
We don’t choose or own our route,
so roundly touted in fabled stories.
Most never get to wear a Sunday suit,
worn down by unfulfilling glories.
Then appears a heckled protestor,
who will never accept their status quo.
As he quietly challenges said professor,
others stand upon the sad line they toe.
And so our chosen paths do cross,
knowing not each others destination.
To tired to understand it is our loss,
that we don’t travel in affirmation.
In the carriage some kick of the day,
reading news so expertly unprepared.
Caring not what they should do or say,
believing in temerity equally shared.
Comments
Glass Castles or Sunday Suits...
Hi Roscoe,
I'm enjoying this rhyme scheme you've placed together then, when I get to the fourth verse, I see this word "mines," and I'm wondering if it is a typing error or perhaps an attempt at politicizing a quasi-colloquial term with the assumption that it has esoteric appeal. In addition I'm wondering if this is a bid for the transcendence of readers to a higher awareness; a collective self perception? Only you know for sure, but it would be nice if you let us in on it.
Glad you enjoyed,
Glad you enjoyed the rhyme scheme first of, mines is meant as in coal mines, gold mines. But mostly a sort of look to the past, when hundreds of thousands worked the mines. And yes I hope there is some sort of transcendence to a different level, should we not get lost in another's words now and again. Thank you for your interest, Regards Roscoe....
Great poem, Roscoe
Beautifully constructed and deeply meaningful. You seem to have learned a lot on Neopoet.
I would like to do a reading of this and post it on Facebook and other social media. May I have your permission?
If you would rather do the reading yourself I will send you the log-on to SoundCloud which links to Facebook.
Thank you Jess,
Thank you Jess for your comments, and please do carry on with your reading. Regards Roscoe...
Hope this is ok, it was an honour to read it, a grand poem.
https://soundcloud.com/neopoet/glass-castles-or-sunday-suits
also posted on our Facebook page Neopoet.com, and Tumblr and Google+
Absolutely amazing.
Absolutely amazing to hear, thank you so very much. Regards Roscoe...