lovedly
lovedly
Mar 28, 2015

blazened lost in antiquity------ read ere i remove

.....Here I see
many new gals and guys want to be poets at sea thinking poetry is easy as Bowasaki hath said if poetry doesn't come to you forget it so I now say also you have composed only ten and run a contest what for first read as many as you can comment on all of them o woman o man then you will see the depth you can fathom poetry is emotion in slower motion words flow out of a fountain then poetry tis else forget it don't go amiss searching for the night a guy or miss poetry tisn't it so be wise read so many I have composed not many have been read here yet except a few and most by those who in me and in my poetry confidence impose then only poetry will come to you think not of what words to use read some ones poetry a dozen or two then poetry will flow like Thames from you..

Now convert this prose into poetry and see if you can so do

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Esker

Esker

8 years 6 months ago

I can understand
Bukowski would have
gotten along with me
he wrote..put out a lot
so he could have
even given advice
how can you aid anyone
with an empty tool kit
aint gonna happen jack!!!

this made my day!

thanks

Mr Wolf!

lovedly

thank god
u did not add
off
yet u say it maid ur day
you confuse me in this
esker either way