OriginalRhyku
Oct 06, 2016

Fo(u)r The Seasons:

Sprouting shoots of Spring
Nature’s bounty emerging
Anew beginning

Summer’s wind flowing
Celestial star’s orb glowing
Flowers are blooming

Drying leaves curling
Fall’s colours encompassing
Autumn abounding

Nipping air chilling
Grounded snow flakes whitening
Winter descending

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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Comments

Sparrow

Each of these is spot on for Haiku, to put the odd one into Barbara's new write you need the extra two lines of 7 syllables each, and judging from these you should have no problem.
Look forward to more from your keys,
Yours Ian..

O

Thank you for your kind review. Having to abide by the Rhyku rules and have each triplet rhyme was an additional challenge to make the poems intelligible as well as interesting.