Guy Jenkins
Guy Jenkins
Oct 01, 2016

Satori

Heroin
sex
a cup of tea
that is a satori

About This Poem

Last Few Words: After a night with a beautiful woman

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Australia

Favorite Poets: Tramalchio

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Comments

jane210660

Hi Guy
Being ever so British, I think I'll settle for the cup of tea! Lol.
Cheers Jx

Sparrow

Welcome to Neopoet I shall put my pipe down and try to focus, ah! So you are blind to your own self,
Teach you we must!
I don't think I need Heroin to see my inner self, the Buddhist teaching doesn't need it, Satori comes from the Japanese for seeing into ones true nature, I find that all I have to do is sit quietly and look inward (Smiling)
Neat write and you would be good at Haiku's have a go at some of Barbara Writes workshops or on going Poetry.
Take care Yours Ian.

alidzain

Welcome to Neopoet. I'm a tea drinker so I can relate to it more than the rest. Keep on writing.

Alid

V

In this brief poem you've chosen words that manage to convey what your 'satori' be. And if it be found with the aid of heroin, etc... then who am i to judge? We all have or own form of 'satori.' Having said that, I enjoyed the read. I like short and 'sweet' and it actually reminds me of something I wrote a while back that I may share with you at some point!