Starlight

I hear your voice it rings with love,
warming my soul and mending my heart.
Keeping me comforted while my eyes look high,
embracing the midnight stars as they flicker and dart.
Flashing across that infinite sky,
linking us with love in the heavens, we are never apart.

Our Souls so closely linked that each star is a jewel.
Cemented in the fabric on the words we start
To make each day a memory anew,
Engraved with timeless love.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Does it make you think of loves magic of moments that you were transfixed in love?

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Hawaii Big Island USApoet . i have written about 100 poems and am waiting for new inspiration!

Favorite Poets: I have never read poetry . I just sat down one day and started to write and after two years I had written 100 poems (free verse) and the inspiration to continue passed!

Comments

Hunting Cupid...

with my starlight night scope
gotta be sparing...batteries go fast..
No lithium then like now...

I was just watching a young couple
at the food bank this morning...
very pretty girl...He very handsome
both decently dressed and operating
as a team...

I remember the Love daze...
my character as it is gets consumed
with each rush into this..
And Yes I identify with all the aspects
of the write...Engraved...Engrained..
when it goes bad...They are scars
etched....and a lot of time its nice just
too dream about the romantic idealism
of what Love may be..compared to the
actual...Getting and having...Prices are
always to be paid...sometimes dearly!

transfixed in love...lol...I look back now
and see it as Enslaved.....sea sirens
drawing me from my ship....
they are charming....and they are beautiful
its like a narcotic Love...Love sickness is
real...insomnia...rapid heart beat...
often tradgic results from egos and madness
gone awry...but Poetry..
Oh the poetry that comes from the
wealth of this...

Great poem..to the ode of Love!

thank U!

comforting

Very comforting to read. It makes me feel good. Thank you.