raj
Jun 30, 2016

The Longing

The stirring and fluttering of the heart
beeping and seeking
an echo from afar
as if the stars gently caressed
strings of a mandolin
to create ripples shore to shore

The returning tide
abounding in orgasmic crescendo
of love joy bubbles
swelling her heart in the knowing
of two hearts beating as one
in profound longing

Amidst the splattered sea shells
is a gift from the shore afar
a beautiful pearl for her pendant
gleaming with his love
to rest close to her heart

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Esker

Esker

8 years 10 months ago

a sounding for depths
and true...people in love
heartrates often match
I like the use of splattering
of sea shells..
the waves and liquid
connotation
then smattering
on a beach on Jamaicas
north side there was a much
profusion of shell fragments
in the modern industry
fresh water pearls are an
affordable device of
affection for a love

and the beeping reminds
me of the hospitals too
having spent some time
there for other reasons
the close watch of the
loved ones in other
beds was a show that
even in times of duress
the true love carries on.

Thank U!

R

Thank you Esker

Appreciate your time to visit this page and for your comment which means a lot for an amateur like me..

Regards,

judyanne

I really like this - a story in pictures....
i especially love the last stanza
love judy
xxx

R

Thanks for your time to read and your comment. A pat on the back from the likes of you means a lot to an amateur like me...

much love and hugs,