All this while....,
I wrote poems like heap of soil,
They seemed like empty glasses,
But thanks to you, for the love,
They are now like flying dove.
Jun 12, 2016
Thanks for your love
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
the fertile of imaginative seeing
re reading this
I like its short concise
construct
its got the ground
and the sky in it
finally linked those
two together in
my head..
it was not commented
on for the entire list
so I wanted to put
it up here..
thank U!
Poem
Welcome to Neopoet I hope your stay with us will be all you wish for in poetry.
This is a place to lean and ask for help of any member they will be there for you.
Your first piece has so much in few words, I look forward to more from you,
Yours Ian.T (Sparrow)
Welcome back Ms. Poem
Nice crisp and expressive poem...it could have been nicer though if the end words of each of the four verses were inter connected...but even other wise it does express what you wish to accomplish...
Thank you everyone
Thank you everyone for the comments,
Yes I'll try to improve and write more
Cheers,
Kavi
i have read you Kavita
If I am not wrong
you have composed and published
poetry book or books
your poetry is deep and lovely
all again welcome thee
neopoet did miss you
we all know
now don't go
Kavita miss
Hi :)
Yes, I have published them on my blog. I feel so good to be back here after long gap. I really had lost myself somewhere.
Will try writing more and improve wherever needed.
Thank you once again :)
Cheers,
Kavi
on your blog only
or also some poetry books
a similar name i have seen somewhere
can't remember where
in some book stalls
may be