Once upon a time a dragon wept;
fair maidens never seemed to understand
why elder set appointments went unkept
(his fervent wish, let sacrifice be banned).
The errant knights who wandered on strange quests
amused him with their pennant, shield and lance,
one hiccup as his hurried lunch digests
would have Sir hot-foot skip a comic dance.
No entertaining tin-can with a spear
could woo him from a woeful want of sleep
at length he sadly quit this sordid sphere
as villagers' vile stories cut too deep.
Then: heroes battled monsters to the death.
Now: faded fairy tales of dragons’ breath.
Comments
are you allowed, or did you intend
to use the rhyme change in stanza 3?
or is this not intended to be a sonnet? Maybe not - is there a volta there?
I actually found it a little off-putting (the rhyme change that is, not the poem - I loved that) - but that's possibly ms rigid me lol
It would still work if you changed the order of the last two verses (lines)
Love the write
Gave me a smile
love judy
xxx
Cut and paste problems
caused that swap. It was unintentional and should really have been exactly as you pointed out. I must hire a proof reader.
charming, even poignant ..
charming, even poignant ...and agree about switching the last two lines.
Done
thank you for commenting, it is always appreciated.