brittle light
brittle light
May 07, 2016

Nix The Dynomometer

Her chassis sway
can't be duplicated
or deconstructed
or impersonated.

Reverse engineering,
kinesthetics,
or computer modeling
still don't get it.

She owns it,
she knows it,
and uses it to her delight,

knowing damn well it's delighting everyone else too.

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Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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brittle light

thanks Keith
I think females also take delight, but sometime just mask it well with other covering reactions.
... not much negative attitudes from females toward Marilyn Monroe, or Gina Lollobrigida...and, man, could they sway and sashay!

(yup, the examples are from from the era of my youth!)