Bring in the Spring Eternal Renga

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For Barbara's Eternal Renga WS Bring in the Spring

Sheer excitement
at awakening of spring
on rosy petals

chorus of peepers at eve
and purple finches at dawn

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

You wonderfully quick. I'm still putting it together. I got my first poem

Hope you liked it for a beginning to the eternal Renga,

Am I in?

Regards,

You get to start it off

The days grow longer
in the season of rebirth,
younglings come to life

Spreading warmth marks winter's end
as bears rise from their slumber.

Alid

I appreciate you springing in. I'm still preparing but glad you're in

I know nothing about renga
at yours I wonder

Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru

Renga is really simple. Are you familiar with haiku and senyru

I do once in a BLEW MOON

oK blue
what else can i do

Ok write a haiku about spring then add to couplets at bottom of it and you have tanka poem for the renga. .

Change this in edit to "bring in the spring" workshop. It's presently in collaborative poetry writing workshop
Thanks.