Rivers are not lazy...
It’s we human only
who tend to go slow
rivers continue to flow
ere the banks overflow
and
cause floods
which even Gods wouldn't know
how to un-flow
so rivers of life as we all now know
continue to flow
as before
no matter how lazy we are.
all are in waiting on the far bank
hope we all swim by
the lazy river of strife
you all now deliver
as a river of life
so very inordinately slow
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obviously inspired these
obviously inspired these verses are by the poem of Joe...nice..
Regards,
obviously raj_sublime
Why would YOU look up at the moon tonight..
.inspired by you
your words on your line
enjoy the ecstasy
when tis time
raj_sublime
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I have written a piece in the "Wisdom Of the Great Bear" where he makes the comparison between the way of mankind to that of a river from its birth, until it re-joins the Ocean at the end of physical existence.
Life is not lazy, I feel for those that cannot see or feel that life has a reason, I suppose that one day we will all find out.
A goodly write there young Bard, I enjoyed watching the flow from the bank,
Yours as always, Ian..
O WISE ONE
Where to read
your WISDOM
thy Kingdom
be welcome
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I have told you many times that most of my work is on :-
yenti.co.uk
It is where I have put most of my writing and must catch up with it again soon, the Great Bears Wisdom is one of the categories,
Take care out there, Yours, Ian