If I could take away the pain
and make a story change track,
If it could stem the flow of tide
to chase the darkness to black
---
To see the devastating agony
that tears apart your soul,
here, I'll keen beside your body
wishing It could make you whole
Nobody deserves these losses
that heaped upon your door,
I know if I looked sometimes,
I'd discover you curling the floor
My dearest sweetest friend
I can feel your pain from here,
know if I had white wings
you'd always have me near
My heart is filling with tears
the ones you've shed today,
I'll hold them close forever
until my last dying day
Your love, it held them dear
it shone with exhaustion's eyes,
you've done an impossible feat
its written there in the sky
Their love will keep you strong
when the pain, eats at your core,
and just when you think it's better
grief will overcome you once more
And when the darkest days
start to hit you with a thud,
don't worry my dear friend
I'll be there, we're best buds
So now, silence will be in our ways
until life's hands draw you back in,
Yes, I'll sit with you and suffer
even when the ice turns thin.
---
And if the Gods made me choose
I'd say, Grief is the hardest pain,
please have a comforting shoulder
as nothing will ever seem the same.
Comments
My goodness, Jayne
Send my condolence to her. It is hard when you lose your loved ones.
This piece is laden with emotion and full of sincerity. Thanks for sharing.
Lots of love and hugs
Alid
Alid
Right now I feel helpless she is busy with family and making plans for the funeral so I am giving her the space she needs, if she needs me she will ask me of that I know.
she's been so through so much pain just wish there was something I could do to ease that pain
love and hugs Jayne x
Our Jayne
It is not hard to see you know of suffering, and the things told to me in many ways show me it is true.
You are one of the few, that can hold another in your arms and keep them from the ills that seek them out.
It is so hard to know that in your suffering you give out more each day than many I know, even the Gods take note of what you do..
A lovely write and from the very heart of you, so as we strive to be perfect no matter what you think of you it is within your grasp.
One day we shall sit a while and talk of these things then all will become clear young Jaughter,
Yours as always Da, and the Children xx
here, I'll keen beside your body
Suffering they name is sometimes Jayne x
Yes Da we both know I know what its like but its ok in my mind to have this pain its something I have to bear, but I hate seeing the ones I love hurting it rips me apart and I feel helpless all over again.
and yes this was from the heart to the page no edits lol as Stan noticed giggle lol
love you always Jaughter x
Hi Jayne
There are a few typos I'm sure you can spot. Doesn't it seem that at times bad things come in bunches. I recall a single year not too long ago losing 5 family members. My heart goes out to your friend........stan
Hey Bro
Your so right we all go through this my bad days are 20 years behind me and in front of me I've had a lot of losses but not a husband and mother together, though I lost my nana then my mum 10mths apart that wrecked me for sometime, I cannot imagine what that's like for her we talk but only when she wants to at the moment I am giving her the space she needs and when she needs to say hi she does just not the happy bubbly gorgeous woman I know and that makes me so sad
think I've fixed the typos but if I missed any give me the heads up been very tired for days and haven't had a decent sleep for, forever It seems like lol
thanks for the comment very glad you guys got a chance to read it
love Sis x
lack of sleep.....
Hmmm......things a person can engage in which usually relax one into sleep.....whatever might that be...? Cant think of one---well, maybe One lmbao
Lmfao ... its not a great
Lmfao ... its not a great solo sport Bro ! Hahah
Biggest hugs and big ass smile !!
to my Jayne
“Sometimes even to live is an act of courage.”
― Seneca
That's such a profound
That's such a profound statement right there my Joe
beautifully sad but oh so true xxx
love your Jayne x
and if you don't mind when
and if you don't mind when the times right, I will be showing that to my friend xxx
we all are born to die
recently
I lost two life long friends
long and good association with both
and now two/three are in pipe line
when will they go
soon
only heaven knows...
but medicines change destinies
and
in God takes away our belief
we only console ourselves
may god be with her
and
the loving souls which have left
in peace may rest...
Amen!
We are already dying at birth
We are already dying at birth
And your right its a cycle this thing called life
Some of us take death harder I don't know why that is but its something I will never be good at coping with, my own death no longer frightens me it did once but not anymore.
I'm ready for the next great adventure :)
Love your Jayne x
my regrets Jane
I just came by and saw u had replied..
In neopoets there is no way
where one can ever know
some one has communicated..
None the less
Lord Buddha you know
hath said
to reduce suffering
reduce the pain.
Loss is such a one
we all have to sustain
and at times life long it remains
I know what I am saying
as I lost both my parents
within months.
It's been half a century since
but they keep coming in still
gone fifty years away
in my dreams
now perhaps awaiting me
I am happy
not now saddened
but in glee
they wait for me