vandiemenspeak
vandiemenspeak
Mar 06, 2016
This poem is part of the contest:

March 2016 - Acrostic - Prize -$25 USD Amazon.com Gift Certificate

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In For A Penny (Acrostic Contest)

In art for my Father, in politics too
Nothing contrived, could ever be true

Forms that shackled, words that stopped
Only served as the clumsiest props
Real expression, should it be coaxed

Arrived like a breath, not forced by a choke

Perhaps, we need to sit and be patient
Expecting too much from a world so ancient
Nascent art, like life, will grow
Near to the rivulet pens that flow,
Year upon year, inscribed, patient, slow.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: OK I know this doesn't use the key words, raven, storm, berries etc. - but I wanted to throw my hat in the ring for an Acrostic poem anyway, so - " In for a penny" :)

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Tasmania,Australia,Earth,Solar Systems,Milky way,Pint of Guniess, AUS

Favorite Poets: Glen Richards

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Comments

Rula

Rula

9 years 1 month ago

I am sure you can come up with something to meet the contest requirements, then you can replace it with this one. You still have the time ahead. Think about it.
Thank you for sharing.

vandiemenspeak

I jumped in a bit early, with much enthusiasm, then retrospectively "bolted on" another stanza at the end which met the criteria, but it was, clumsy and too contrived, so i dropped it. i will try and do a re-write within the rules soon..

Thanks for checking it out anyway.

Chris.