Swan Lake
a morning of glory
pristine water
shimmering light
gilding swans
black and white.
a gliding light
soaring high
above the tides
twirling, spinning
in the wind
a white crane nearby.
Swan Lake
a morning of glory
pristine water
shimmering light
gilding swans
black and white.
a gliding light
soaring high
above the tides
twirling, spinning
in the wind
a white crane nearby.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Hi Barbara
Good to see you posting again...and posting a nice free flowing poem..
Regards,
Raj
Thanks
I've been trying to manage this ms. It really attacks my eyes and make it hard to see. I found out I have the worse type of ms called primary. Only 10% of ppl who have ms get this type. It's the worst bc there's no remission between relapse. There's no cure, treatment or medicine available that helps. The other three types have remission between relapses of the diseases.
Glad I could write and post this one
Hi Barbara
You deserve to be saluted for your courage and effort you put in spite of the challenges...You are a loved member here by many and our best wishes are always with you...
take best care..be well..
Warm regards,
Thanks raj
I really appreciate my poetry friends here
Hi Barb
I absolutely loved the imagery..........stan
Hi Barb
I absolutely loved the imagery..........stan
Thanks Stan
I'm glad you enjoyed it