raj
Oct 06, 2015

Lovestruck

Life was lived in moments
letting them slip
like sand through fingers
walking past them
leaving footprints
to be swept by a tide

little did the tide know
what those footprints had to say
the sand kept those secrets
till they wore away
like sea shells

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

S

No chopped prose here!. In my opinion a most excellent free verse with good use of metaphor.......stan

Rula

Rula

9 years 6 months ago

"little did the tide know
what those footprints had to say
the sand kept those secrets
till they wore away
like sea shells"

Raj, this is specially awesome!!
PS. Is Lovestruck one word?

R

Thanks Rula for the time, visit, read and comment. Good to know you liked the second portion of verses...

Not sure if it should be Lovestruck or Love Struck or any other title..

Regards,

Rula

Rula

9 years 6 months ago

can be anything you feel the poem conveys.

Seren

Seren

9 years 1 month ago

I was going to come across this

What beautiful freeverse I feel privelaged to read poetry this good and be lucky enough to be able to discuss it with the poet ..

This is profoundly good my friend .. such a pleasure to read ... sigh

Love Jayne x

R

thanks for the read and your comment which will inspire me to write better...

Take good care..be well..

Much love and warm hugs...