lovedly
lovedly
Feb 23, 2016

3 4 1

Three for just one

Out in the clouds
rolling wet
she still wonders yet

She awaits his decision
now or later
whenever

In that moment
of chaos
he wondered
where to kiss first

But what can you say
about a man
in the desert

What comes
nearest first
thrust!
or
thirst...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Sparrow

A mix here, being in the wet and the desert at the same time, and not knowing ones own state, rest springs to mind then there will be plenty of time for other things,
This needs some filling in there are gaps, more story please,
Yours Ian..