r u living in the now

living in the now

you can live
only in the now,
now

yesterday has gone
as a wow

tomorrow may come
but
not ever as a tomorrow
but again another now

so remember
the now
and
live it as you may
some how

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Just wait a while I shall catch up or slow down, but either way, I walk with you.
Yours as always Ian..

now ur
slow man

As I write this and ty[e one letter then the next I have slipped out of present into past.

Good write, my friend

joe

your diligence and persistence
glad Richards helps u

good friends r hard to find
keep it FRESH in mind
Sir Joe

if this poem's title is a question, I'll answer yes. Love the last stanza

Alid.

whats ur QS ?

if the title of this poem is added a question mark at the end, I'll answer "yes".

Alid

poetry and grammar
have no glamour
it's just your understanding
man
amen

Alid, my friend. I was taught not to use question marks in poetry. Prose grammar generally does not apply. :)

joe

Thank you for the rescue
I keep telling all
ur a great poet
they may listen

Good one Lovedly...short and succinct..

Regards,

kind u passed by
happy valentiny