OCEAN’S BLUE
I slip and slide between
dark and light
like a drowning man
swept away with fear and doubt
in a river raging,
blinded to that saving grace
to cling onto.
but as the waters flow
into Ocean’s blue
I will know the time to let go
for we alI must follow…
Comments
your poetry is so wonderful
Joe
compose one for the welfare of
Neopoet Snow
will try, my friend
will try, my friend
Joe
a lovely piece from your thoughts again,
we all head toward the Ocean..
Take care, Yours, Ian..
wow.......ur poetry rocks!
brave....hell man U are a hardrock!
happy to call U friend Joe!
essence...
got that one from U
I understand now
U help me so much
forever
carry the fire my brother
I shall
thank U
and we go on
till the end!
mr wolf!
very few
comment here on very few
you are one
second is Ian
Yes, nothing has changed, I
Yes, nothing has changed, I post for my own pleasure and am glad to see there are true poets on this site who recognize true poetry,
I am just happy I still have a mind.
joe
so am I
as i too have a mind
and hope you will remember me
when reading and commenting poetry
today i saw my profile
hundreds of poems i did compile
but owing to Neopeoets non interest
they remain shelved
unread in files
this ordains NEO'S DEMISE!
Side but what a prize
It is difficult to write,
It is difficult to write, Painful. But I do it for the sake of my own mental health and to remain in contact with friends like you.
[Richard for Joe]
thank you
it is essential to keep
ones mind
ACTIVE