Love Lost

Empty bed cold heart

only memories remain

dreams buried alive

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Diego, California U.S.A., USA

Favorite Poets: Shakespear

Comments

a good little

Poem. I think its subject make it a senyru. Whatever,
welcome to Neopoet.

Thank you Rula, you are right

Thank you Rula, you are right, the subject is much closer to a Senru than a Haiku, I appreciate your review and your kind words. I am looking forward to reviewing some of yours this evening. Buddha

still

God blessed
Buddha
wisdom still alive

Thank you as always Lovedly.

Thank you as always Lovedly. I can always rely on your reviews. Buddha

hope you will

read those of mine

yet unread by any