Ice
Dice
roll
to
fall
upon
a
double
five
smooth
as
glass
slide
the stones
from
pointed
tongue
to
tongue
to
pass
the
bar
on the
way
home,
get
the party
safely back
and
one
by
one
into
the
winning
stack.
Dec 12, 2015
Tabulae
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
MDT
Liked the format it made a change, not sure if it will catch on though.
I missed your works before but will watch out for you, Yours Ian.T