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Oct 13, 2015

riviera of lively sojourn

riviera of lively sojourn

river of benevolence......
I compare one’s whole life...
to a River
as it emanates as forest dew drops......
then enlarges to bigger ones...
and
falls as a waterfall...
and
with the kinetic energy gained
and
with the momentum
gushes forth at break neck speed...
then meanders....
cuts corners...
erodes...
strikes boulders
and
gradually slows down...
till at the estuary
it splits into tributaries...
tired as it merges
back into the sea or ocean...of no return
as a non entity
one of no return...
simply merge to once again
someday as clouds emerge
to form and bring about
Petrichor!

What more!

riviera of lively sojourn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

weirdelf

neither sufficiently scientific nor emotional/metaphoric.
Sorry, my dear, not one of your gems.