JULY CONTEST

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Back To School July Contest

Back to school excitement
Memories from long ago
Spring flowers sprouting.

Roaring school busses
At the crack of dawn
In expectation first day of school.

Everybody's wearing new clothes
Adorning new sneakers
Chatter filling the hallways.

Many hating to return
Others joyous to be back
Old friends new friends happy greeting.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I'm taking brain training to help my backwardness. Hopefully my poetry writing will be better. Did it work.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

Comments

You are my favourite poeple and poets

I am honoured to be your mentor and your courage in adversity humbles me.
This is a fine poem and it excites me with your excitement in learning.

Thanks

I couldn't have had a better mentor. You are number 1 on my list of favorite people and poet. Glad you like the poem. It was a rush job getting in

Thanks

I couldn't have had a better mentor. You are number 1 on my list of favorite people and poet. Glad you like the poem. It was a rush job getting in

Thank you for your entry. As usual I expect the judge will have a hard time closing among the entries. BTW, you forgot to put (July contest) next to title which makes it easier for the judge to spot it. Have fun over there in Hawaii...........stan

Thanks Stan

Having lots of fun. Bought timeshares today, so'll be back next year. Thanks I was trying to get poem in bf deadline of 25 th. I'll will make the change now.

u r in line for a

July win win situ
have two big guys praise u
judge will be influenced too
advance congrats barbara 2 u

Damn

Looks like I aint even getting that holiday for second place, OK I shall accept the $1000 just this once.
Barbara, This one is up there keeping the rest down lol, Take care have a great day..
I'm off to the food bank again, yours a poor poet, Ian, xx

stay poor

after you have gone
like mine your poetry
will also be as
DEAR!