DIFFERENT ROADS
Life is movement and change
and nothing is ever the same;
for the worse or for the better.
one finds a different way
and rejoices in the finding;
the other is left behind crying
trying to understand the nature of loss
and the pain of ending.
Comments
hi Joe
I like this, until the word 'never'.i think I would prefer something like 'struggling' ... because I do believe we will understand one day :)
Can i challenge you Joe?
Write a poem about something good that has happened to you ...
You can return the challenge if you like
:)
Love judy
xxx
Thanks, Judyanne. I will make
Thanks, Judyanne. I will make a change
joe
OF WORDS
OF WORDS
What is the power of words
but to speak the truth
of life's moments
There is no truth in joy
where there is pain
there is no room for pain
where there is pleasure.
there is a beauty in all things
in beginnings and ends
in Spring and in Winter,
Let the soul tell its sadness
let the heart break when to break
is all that it can do
Joe
A good write and there must have been a correction as it reads fine.
We walk the same pathway but different roads..
As with Judy it is time to write of something we can rejoice in that has happened to us, just let me know I will join in the challenge.
Take care young Joe , see you at the journey's end,
Yours Ian..
please do read my other comment
kindly please Joe
Great short write!
concisely worded this very well!
i was not good with the personal nor intimate
we were glad when endings come..
sometimes looking..
it is hard ...but so was those years
thick skin or fall in.and never come out.
even in passing we cannot have our
moment...some people control that
vast..my mother was like this.
equally funny..and all the rest..
but yes..nothing worse then paying
for it in real time..and then just
not knowing for the rest..
an entirety of existance in this
hazy place...
my life!
so I can relate to the poem
well even if I cannot express it!
in so much too myself..
why poetry helps others..
How this has helped me greatly
today!!
thank U Geremia!
Nothing was ever easy...and
Nothing was ever easy...and it just gets harder, We pay our dues--some of us--for each moment of joy.
thanks,, Sreve
SEE EVEN Judy joins me to say
SEE EVEN Judy
joins me to say
shred or shed your negativity away
compose some beautiful poetry to day
we all will and must
as have to
will pass away
one day
so while living
why sad should we stay
lets be happy
and
like yesterday be gay ,
if not like that
your country promotes today
Have a Happy tone
from today
my way!
OF WORDS
OF WORDS
What is the power of words
but to speak the truth
of life's moments
There is no truth in joy
where there is pain
there is no room for pain
where there is pleasure.
there is a beauty in all things
in beginnings and ends
in Spring and in Winter,
Let the soul tell its sadness
let the heart break when to break
is all that it can do..
is a glass half full or half empty?
nothing i can do
a glass is always full
half liquid and balance air
never is a glass empty
so use word
as u wish to
be opti or pessi
MISTICKSSSss
what can Loved do???
Hi Joe
I reckon we are sent hard times so we'll truly appreciate the good ones..........stan