We are wise not to meddle
with the words of yon Muse,
allowing them to touch us--
avowed by torchlit trysts;
each thought cradled in nettles'
elegiac vine rows muse
such fearsome elegance behold!
Jun 19, 2015
ocular appraisal
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
good lyric
why i don't say lyrics is, i still feel you should have written more,and the term ocular appraisals.. well you shouldn't bilaterally dump the congeal phrase of complaisance, not by its meaning to the linking of the work, but the imagination of rising more stronger verge and passive archetypal study .but this is still a very appreciated work, hope to read more from you, my friend
thanks
Kindly. You are much appreciatedâș