raj
Apr 29, 2015

The Longing

Streaming eyes
dampening the spirit
a thread bare winter coat
fighting chills
rushing through denuded limbs
autumn wrought upon
that Summer Eve

Will spring bring back
the goosebumps
before the flurry like kisses
my lips keep
disappear in the greens
like dreams

Or will the spring return
with lavender and roses
sparkling with dew drops
my eyes seek
while summer in my bosom
keeps your warmth
like orchids

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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lovedly

becoming a seasoned poet
of NEOPOET
and the best one at that
all
even jess
will vouch

I RETURN
TO LEARN
with due concern

alidzain

I really love this piece. smooth flow, wonderful images. Love it.

Alid

Rula

Rula

9 years 12 months ago

Great imagery through out. I love it but in some places I really thought you need to add some punctuation.
But it's up to you of course.

R

raj

9 years 12 months ago

Thank you Rula for your time and visit. You are one of the very few who find it worthy to visit and comment.

Seren

Seren

9 years 11 months ago

Your growth is amazing and is clearly shown in this write ... your becoming a bard my lord ... alas but it is true, smile.

My favourite poem of ALL of your poems

love and big hugs Jayne xox

Seren

Seren

9 years 1 month ago

had to come back again and read it over a few times

it as beautiful tonight as it was the first time I read it my friend
I gushed last time but in the present now

I sigh

love and biggest hugs Jayne xxx

R

raj

9 years 1 month ago

Your words of appreciation made me overwhelm because its not very often I hear them...will inspire me to improve continually and keep me on the learning curve..

Many thanks, much love and warm tight hugs..

take good care..be well..