Scream (traditional, not original content)

This piece is all about performance, so I'm not even going to post the words.

https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/scream-traditional-scary-song?fb_a…

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics

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Comments

Jess

that was amazing, but for a moment, (you must know when) when I thanked God that I hadn't my headphones on.
A great share indeed
Thank you.

thanks Rula

kids love it! They must get a huge adrenalin rush from the fright which they can enjoy, feeling safe afterwards.

I'm not too sure what to think of this?

Provocative at least. Not yours? Felt like it.

Its been a while I have been in and out of hospital ... not quite sure what to think of this my mind just couldn't get round it tonight, its not the fault of the poem in this case ?more the fault of the reader being a little brain dead ...

Cheers and hugs Jayne

I have tried to ring you again a couple of times its been hard to catch up with you my friend ... :)

ill be back again I need to here this with a clearer head tbh